My poems, i can't tell?

the first one is better than the second one,the line i just smile louder is fabulous,in my opinion the last verse could be better. In second poem you are forcing the rhyming. If you really want to challenge yourself,try writing something happy.It's a common thing to write heartbreakers,but hardly anyone can do the happy thing! Good luck,you show promise! Oh,in second one the line their boundaries are beginning to blend is great too.